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Tuesday, November 15th 2005

1:10 AM

Broken

  • Mood: Irritated
  • Music: Photograph by Nickleback

Broken

 

Broken like shattered glass she tries not to   

Remember who he was.

Oh how it hurts to just lie there in pain.

Knowing the loss she never wanted to gain.

Every day she blames all her hurt on him.

Nothing else mattered in her heart but him.





2 Comment(s).

Posted by Josh Nay:

You should write a whole book of these. Seriously. You can call it the "First-letter Super Cool and Talented Poetic Hits of Humanity by Maryanna Patlakis" or something. Great work! :)
Wednesday, November 16th 2005 @ 1:27 PM

Posted by Josh Nay:

Yeah, I'm serious. You are really good. Not very many writers can make a good poem out of the letters like you can. It is very rare. Take care and keep up the good work! :)
Friday, November 18th 2005 @ 1:45 PM

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